Monday, September 23, 2013

My City by Marlo


4 comments:

  1. Hi Marlo
    That was a cool poem about Auckland. I liked what you did with the background. And what makes the building fantastic is the windows and how they are Yellow and good colour combination.

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  2. I especially like your line "cities need parks and people that don't make junk piles" I think that could be the new motto for Auckland City!

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  3. HI Marlo
    Great city poem, your's is one of the only ones I've seen that actually rymes and makes scence about what it actually says, great job!

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